Friday, December 14, 2007

The International Food Fair article

The International Food Fair was held in Methodist College on the seventh of December, 2007. Form 2 students organized the food fair because they wanted to donate money to ' Docters without Borders'. Some students cried because they could not put on their banner.
The food fair was a bad event because it was environmental unfriendly. It could not help students in their studies. Moreover, there was a lot of food left and it was a waste of food.

1 comment:

Wootang01 said...

Nice job, Sunny; you certainly presented a highly critical angle to the event, presenting some of the more unflattering facts surrounding our fair.

Perhaps the line about crying could be mentioned in the last paragraph instead of the first - is mentioning crying so important that it must be put in the first paragraph?

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